What is a perfect day for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
A perfect day for me is day off of course.
If there are days off in a row, I usually meet friends one day, and the other day I take a rest alone.
When I wake up without alarm and make my own brunch leisurely. Then I go to the gym to exercise.
To take care of myself make me feel perfect.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. A day off is indeed a perfect day to spend with friends and do the things we love.
^^T.JAMIE
A perfect day for me is day off of course.
>>A perfect day for me is day off of course.
If there are days off in a row, I usually meet friends one day, and the other day I take a rest alone.
>>If I have consecutive days off, I usually spend one day meeting with friends, and the other day I take a rest alone.
When I wake up without alarm and make my own brunch leisurely. Then I go to the gym to exercise.
>>When I wake up an without alarm and make my own brunch leisurely, I then go to the gym to exercise.
To take care of myself make me feel perfect.
>>Taking care of myself makes me feel perfect.
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