What is a perfect vacation for you?
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First, We have to know that city or country before we go to vacation.
such as subway station\'s location, bus timetable, or arround accomodation what we stay,
It makes us increased time allows for exploring everywhere, making it more efficient.
Second, It\'s going where I want to go.
As I loves the sea, I prefer going to places with the ocean rather than areas with many mountains.
Also, It is good to eat what I prefer than eat food that I don\'t particularly enjoy.
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First, We have to know that city or country before we go to vacation.
>>> First, we have to know that city or country before we go there for vacation.
such as subway station\'s location, bus timetable, or arround accomodation what we stay,
>>> This includes the subway station location, bus timetable, or the surrounding of the accommodation where will will say in.
It makes us increased time allows for exploring everywhere, making it more efficient.
>>> It makes us effectively use our time for exploring everywhere, making it more efficient.
Second, it\'s going where I want to go.
It makes us increased time allows for exploring everywhere, making it more efficient.
>>> It makes us effectively use our time for exploring everywhere, making it more efficient.
Second, it\'s going where I want to go.
>>> correct
As I loves the sea, I prefer going to places with the ocean rather than areas with many mountains.
As I loves the sea, I prefer going to places with the ocean rather than areas with many mountains.
>>> correct
Also, It is good to eat what I prefer than eat food that I don\'t particularly enjoy.
>>> Also, it is good to eat what I prefer than eating food that I don\'t particularly enjoy.
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