What is a perfect weekend for you?

2019-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I think that be free and peaceful is a perfect weekend for me! Because I \'m so busy to my weekdays. I\'m usually wake up 7 A.M on the weekdays. And then I go swimming at 7:30. I swim for about an hour. And I eat breakfast 9 A.M. And then I study english continuously. I finish my day by work out at the fitness centor. I go to bed usually 1A.M. So I have just sleep on the weekend. The ideal is that I go to the park and sit or lie on the grass and I read a book.

강사 첨삭

I think that be free and peaceful is a perfect weekend for me!

>> I think that a free and peaceful is a perfect weekend for me!


Because I \'m so busy to my weekdays.

>> CORRECT


 I\'m usually wake up 7 A.M on the weekdays.

>> I usually wake up at 7AM on the weekdays.


And then I go swimming at 7:30.

>> CORRECT


I swim for about an hour.

>> CORRECT


And I eat breakfast 9 A.M.

>> And I eat breakfast at 9AM.


And then I study english continuously.

>> And then I study English continuously.


 I finish my day by work out at the fitness centor.

>>  I finish my day by working out at the fitness center.


I go to bed usually 1A.M. So I have just sleep on the weekend.

I usually go to bed at 1 A.M. So, I just have to sleep on the weekends.


The ideal is that I go to the park and sit or lie on the grass and I read a book.

>> CORRECT

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