What is a perfect weekend for you?
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I think that be free and peaceful is a perfect weekend for me!
>> I think that a free and peaceful is a perfect weekend for me!
Because I \'m so busy to my weekdays.
>> CORRECT
I\'m usually wake up 7 A.M on the weekdays.
>> I usually wake up at 7AM on the weekdays.
And then I go swimming at 7:30.
>> CORRECT
I swim for about an hour.
>> CORRECT
And I eat breakfast 9 A.M.
>> And I eat breakfast at 9AM.
And then I study english continuously.
>> And then I study English continuously.
I finish my day by work out at the fitness centor.
>> I finish my day by working out at the fitness center.
I go to bed usually 1A.M. So I have just sleep on the weekend.
I usually go to bed at 1 A.M. So, I just have to sleep on the weekends.
The ideal is that I go to the park and sit or lie on the grass and I read a book.
>> CORRECT
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