What is a relaxing vacation for you and where would it be?

2024-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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I prefer to rest fully during my vacation not a enjoying like a travling. So, I usually go to a vacation spot not tourist spot for my vacation. Southeast asia is the perfect spot for me.

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]! Thank you for sharing your opinion about a relaxing vacation. Your effort is appreciated.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I prefer to rest fully during my vacation not a enjoying like a travling.
>> I prefer to fully rest during my vacation rather than enjoy activities like traveling. 

So, I usually go to a vacation spot not tourist spot for my vacation. Southeast asia is the perfect spot for me.
>> So, I usually choose a vacation spot rather than a tourist spot. Southeast Asia is the perfect destination for me.

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