What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?
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I think it\'s industrious.
>> I think it\'s being industrious.
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>> I think it\'s industriousness.
When foreigners see Koreans, what they always say is that Korean are industrious.
If a person is industrious, he or she can easily handle things and become a newcomer who stands out from his or her supervisor.
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I also learned industrious from my parents and used that skill to lose weight.
>> I also learned industriousness from my parents and used it to lose weight.
After my third grade in high school, I set up a regular schedule to lose weight up to 20kg and diligently went out to the gym.
As I went out diligently, I naturally became close to gym members and trainers and helped them exercise.
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That\'s how I lost more that 20kg.
>> That\'s how I lost more than 20kg.
But that\'s not the case with the current generation.
Today\'s generation is a fast-changing world, it\'s a world that lives well, and it\'s a world with many options, so it\'s fast to give up.
I can\'t say that\'s not the case here.
So always adults say to MZ generation all the time, \"You guys are so quick to give up.\"
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Maybe it\'s my opinion, but adults won\'t say that if a person shows industrity.
>>Maybe it\'s my opinion, but adults won\'t say that if a person shows industriousness.
The view of the younger generation may change, and furthermore, it may reduce the intensifying conflict between generations, if any.
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