What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?
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There can be various skills to make people successful in the world. Some people may think of presentation skill because it is definitely required to work at company. Others may consider communication ability as an important one to success. Of course, I think that those skills are important but in my case, language ability, particularly English, is very important to be successful in the world.
English is global language and expecially in a business field it is utilized as a common language. I think that it is okay if one cannot speak English well but it might prevent him from being promoted and successful at company. This is because most of company want to go to abroad if its market share in domestic is enough huge. At a time like this, if he cannot use English well, he won't be able to show his ability and to get an opportunity to be promoted.
English isn't everything to be successful in the world, but I can't deny that mastering English can make possibility to success much higher.
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Good morning Miss [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. I agree with you that since English is a universal language, mastering it could open a lot of opportunities for success. So good luck and I hope that you will continue to improve your English skills.~Kelly^^
There can be various skills to make people successful in the world.
>> There are various skills that can make people become successful in the world.
Some people may think of presentation skill because it is definitely required to work at company.
>> Some people may think that a skill in giving a presentation is one way to become successful because it is definitely required at work.
Others may consider communication ability as an important one to success.
>> Others may consider a good communication ability as an important ingredient to success.
Of course, I think that those skills are important but in my case, language ability, particularly English, is very important to be successful in the world.
>> Correct.English is global language and expecially in a business field it is utilized as a common language.
>> English is a global language and especially in the business field, where it is utilized as a common language.
I think that it is okay if one cannot speak English well but it might prevent him from being promoted and successful at company.
>> I think that it is okay if one cannot speak English well, but it might prevent him from being promoted and successful at work.
This is because most of company want to go to abroad if its market share in domestic is enough huge.
>> This is because most companies want to branch out especially abroad if their market share in domestic is huge enough.
At a time like this, if he cannot use English well, he won\'t be able to show his ability and to get an opportunity to be promoted.>> In a situation like this, if an employee cannot speak English well, he won\'t be able to show his ability and get an opportunity to be promoted.
English isn\'t everything to be successful in the world, but I can\'t deny that mastering English can make possibility to success much higher.
>> English isn\'t everything that we need to be successful in the world, but I can\'t deny the fact that mastering it can open a lot of possibility in becoming more successful.
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