What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?

2015-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? I think using SNS marketing is the most important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world. There are several reasons to support my opinion. First of all, all most people use SNS at least more than one and they might use SNS everyday. So, SNS is being a one of most important marketing strategy. Also SNS marketing isn't only target nationally but also internationally by easy way. But if marketing using SNS something wrong, it could be heavy problem in world wise. So it is very important skill to using SNS for marketing but on the other hand, it could be very carefully.

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Good morning! Thanks for sharing your opinion. You were able to express it understandably. I gave some corrections so kindly go over them. Have a great day! ~T. Jessie~ What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? I think using SNS marketing is the most important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world. >> Correct!There are several reasons to support my opinion.>> Correct!First of all, all most people use SNS at least more than one and they might use SNS everyday. >> First of all, almost all people use SNS at least more than once and they might use SNS everyday. So, SNS is being a one of most important marketing strategy. >> So, SNS is one of the most important marketing strategy. Also SNS marketing isn\'t only target nationally but also internationally by easy way. >> Also SNS marketing doesn\'t only target the nation\'s market but also international market. But if marketing using SNS something wrong, it could be heavy problem in world wise. >> But if there is something wrong with tje marketing using SNS, it could also be a big problem world wide. So it is very important skill to using SNS for marketing but on the other hand, it could be very carefully. >> So it is a very important skill to use SNS for marketing but on the other hand,  the person should be very carefully.

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