What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? C

2015-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think the most important skill a person should learn or keep in order to succeed in these days is a communication skill. Although the modern society heavily relies on advanced technologies such as email and video conferences rather than face to face meetings to communicate with others, the communication skill is still regarded as one of the critical factors that determine how competent you are. It doesn’t matter how smart and capable you are. Unless you organize, present, explain, persuade or negotiate well as you wish or think, you cannot expect others to recognize your ability or read your mind. In today’s competitive society, people don’t have patience to wait until you naturally reveal your competency or bother themselves to spend their valuable time to find out your hidden ability. As people’s physical appearance is getting important, how to express your thoughts is becoming more critical than ever. You are how to communicate and what to say regardless of your thoughts.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon and happy mid-week, Sir [이름]!

I am so blessed to have a diligent student like you. ^^

You are definitely right! Communication skill is really important.

And I am so happy that you don\'t give up in enhancing your skills.

Way to go. I am always here to guide and help you. ^^

Take care.
Teacher Nina


I think the most important skill a person should learn or keep in order to succeed in these days is a communication skill.

>> I think the most important skill a person should learn or keep in order to succeed these days is communication skill.

Although the modern society heavily relies on advanced technologies such as email and video conferences rather than face to face meetings to communicate with others, the communication skill is still regarded as one of the critical factors that determine how competent you are.

>> correct

>> OR: Although the modern society heavily relies on advanced technologies such as email and video conferences rather than face to face meetings to communicate with others. Communication skill is still regarded as one of the critical factors that determine how competent you are.

It doesn’t matter how smart and capable you are.

>> correct

Unless you organize, present, explain, persuade or negotiate well as you wish or think, you cannot expect others to recognize your ability or read your mind.

>> correct

In today’s competitive society, people don’t have patience to wait until you naturally reveal your competency or bother themselves to spend their valuable time to find out your hidden ability.

>> correct

As people’s physical appearance is getting important, how to express your thoughts is becoming more critical than ever.

>> correct

You are how to communicate and what to say regardless of your thoughts.

>> correct

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