What is a very important thing to remember when driving a car? Answer in a short paragraph.
학생이 쓴 원문
One of important things that we should remember for driving is do a seat belt. This is because it related to our safety.
I know there are many other things we have to do for our safety when we driving such as keep the driving speed and traffic light.
Keeping those things enable us to drive safely.
However, we are keep in mind that there are possibilties to happen unexpected accidents by others, even though we follow all of regulations for driving.
For this kinds of happening, doing a seat belt is one of the most secure way for our safety. This allows us to avoid the worst situations.
Therefore, I believe that seat belt is one of very critical things when we drive a car.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Hae Su!
Thank you very much for the great effort to answer my question about our topic for today. Putting on the car\'s seatbelt saves lives. Whenever we get into the car, safety is the top priority thus, we need to put on that seatbelt.
Well, if you must drive soon, fasten your seat belt and drive in the required speed limit.
This one\'s very good! Keep it up and until next essay.
-T. Donna =)
>> One of the important thing that we should remember when driving is to put on the seat belt.
This is because it related to our safety.
I know there are many other things we have to do for our safety when we driving such as keep the driving speed and traffic light.
Keeping those things enable us to drive safely.
For this kinds of happening, doing a seat belt is one of the most secure way for our safety.
Therefore, I believe that seat belt is one of very critical things when we drive a car.
>> This is because it is related to our safety.
I know there are many other things we have to do for our safety when we driving such as keep the driving speed and traffic light.
>> I know that there are many other things we have to do for our safety when we are driving such as following the driving speed and traffic light.
Keeping those things enable us to drive safely.
>> Correct!
However, we are keep in mind that there are possibilties to happen unexpected accidents by others, even though we follow all of regulations for driving.
However, we are keep in mind that there are possibilties to happen unexpected accidents by others, even though we follow all of regulations for driving.
>> However, we have to keep in mind that there are possibilities that can happen unexpectedly like accidents by others, even though we follow all of regulations for driving.
For this kinds of happening, doing a seat belt is one of the most secure way for our safety.
>> For these kinds of happening, putting on a seat belt is one of the most secure way for our safety.
This allows us to avoid the worst situations.
>> Correct!
Therefore, I believe that seat belt is one of very critical things when we drive a car.
>> Therefore, I believe that seat belt is one of the very critical things when we drive a car.
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