What is an attitude you want to change this year? Why?
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What is an attitude you want to change this year? Why?
I am not sure what I want to change in my attitude becuase I have so many things that I cannot change.
I need to just accept myself...and think positively.
Oh, I want to try to be satistfied with my current conditions.
Throwing away my greediness might be the attitude that I should attain.
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Hello [이름]!
I need to just accept myself...and think positively.
Oh, I want to try to be satisfied with my current conditions.
Throwing away my greediness might be the attitude that I should attain.
It was nice talking to you in class today!
I hope you enjoy your weekend~
See you next week~
I am not sure what I want to change in my attitude because I have so many things that I cannot change.
>>CORRECT
I need to just accept myself...and think positively.
>>CORRECT
Oh, I want to try to be satisfied with my current conditions.
>>CORRECT
Throwing away my greediness might be the attitude that I should attain.
>>CORRECT
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