What is an example of a time you and your friends/parents/relatives/grandparents had an argument or
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yes. it exists.
>> Yes, it exists.
nowadays as soon as appears the private cafe,
20s like to go there and take some picture for uploading their sns.
>> Nowadays, people in their 20s like going to cafes to take pictures which they can upload in their SNS accounts.
but over 40s, they can\'t understand the 20s.
because they think it is the waste of money.
>> But people who are over 40 years of age can\'t understand it because they think that it\'s a waste of money.
it can be the waste, but it is small but sure happiness for 20s.
>> It can be a waste of money but it gives happiness for people in their 20s.
at the 20s, we don\'t have enough money doing something.
>> People in their 20s don\'t have enough money to spend on the things that they like.
so going to private cafe, ordering something i want, drinking and talking with someone give us happiness.
>> By going to cafes and by ordering the things we want while drinking and talking to our friends give us happiness.
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