What is an extracurricular activity that has been meaningful to you?
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It is meaningful for me to attend soccer club.
>>> It is meaningful for me to attend a soccer club.
That is why the club offers me a chance to make friends.
>>> My club offers me a chance to make friends.
Actually, most of participants are aboout my age.
>>> Actually, most of the participants are about my age.
So I have leaned soccer skill without concerns.
>>> So I have learned soccer skills without concerns.
And, We share their stories in a respective job.
>>> In our club, we share our stories about our respective jobs.
So, It could get me some job information and benefit from others.
>>> So, I can get some information which is very beneficial for me.
For example, one of members is working at movie theater as a manager.
>>> For example, one of the members is working at a movie theater as a manager.
So he has a right to see the movies for free by the company policies.
>>> Correct!
He give me movie tickets so, I can enjoy seeing movie without any payment.
>>> He gives me movie tickets so I can enjoy watching movies without paying anything.
even it is possible to attend movie preview without reservation.
>>> I can even attend movie screening without making a reservation.
by the attending soccer clubs. I can save the money and time.
>>> By attending soccer clubs, I can save money and time.
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