what is being successful for you?
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I experienced success in my future career plan.
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These days, I have talked with some headhunters and each headhunter I met all said different opinion on my future career.
>> I have talked with some headhunters and each headhunter I met all said different opinion on my future career these days.
It has helped me to reflect on myself and consider what I want to do. It took almost 2month for me to decide on it.
>> It has helped me to reflect on myself and consider what I want to do. It took almost 2 months for me to decide on it.
it was a hard time for me because there are lots of things to consider and I have many options for the next career.
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