What is bread? How important is bread in your life?
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Bread is the solid that baked with flour and water with heat.Bread is important in my life because it is deliciouse when we eat it with milk for my snack everyday.
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Bread is the solid that baked with flour and water with heat.
>>> Bread is solid food that is baked with flour and water through heat.
Bread is important in my life because it is deliciouse when we eat it with milk for my snack everyday.
>>> Bread is important in my life because it is delicious to eat with milk as an everyday snack.
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