What is different between sports and e-sports? Which do you prefer?
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It is so difficult to define a difference between sports and e-sports.
E-sports is electronic sports. So e-sports is the sports that electronic devices are used to do, like computers or consoles or something.
But these days, electronic equipment is used to normal sports like taekwondo or fencing to check points.
And depending on physical action, I can define a difference.
We don\'t need to use my bodies but fingers. But, it is same when it comes to shooting or something.
So I think it is so hard to distinguish two words and difference is getting disappeared.
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Happy Monday, Ian!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with you when you mentioned that it is difficult to distinguish e-sport from traditional sports. The main thing that we can remember is that traditional sports require all players to be physically present on the same field or court while e-sports allows players to compete from all over the world via the internet.
-T. Caitlyn
It is so difficult to define a difference between sports and e-sports.
>> It is so difficult to distinguish the difference between sports and e-sports.
E-sports is electronic sports.
>> CORRECT
So e-sports is the sports that electronic devices are used to do, like computers or consoles or something.
>> So e-sports are sports that use electronic devices such as computers, consoles, and the like.
But these days, electronic equipment is used to normal sports like taekwondo or fencing to check points.
But these days, electronic equipment is used to normal sports like taekwondo or fencing to check points.
>> But these days, electronic equipment is also used in normal sports like taekwondo or fencing to check the points.
And depending on physical action, I can define a difference.
And depending on physical action, I can define a difference.
>> But if based on physical actions, I can distinguish the difference.
We don\'t need to use my bodies but fingers. But, it is same when it comes to shooting or something.
We don\'t need to use my bodies but fingers. But, it is same when it comes to shooting or something.
>> We don\'t need to use our bodies but only our fingers, which is the same when it comes to shooting or something.
So I think it is so hard to distinguish two words and difference is getting disappeared.
So I think it is so hard to distinguish two words and difference is getting disappeared.
>> So I think it is so hard to distinguish the two and their differences are disappearing.
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