What is discrimination?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I think that dividing someone just because they belong to a different group from me is discrimination.
2. I don\'t remember being discriminated against in particular.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jace!
Good job! Your sentences are very clear. Just a small tip: in English, we usually say “different than me” (or “different from me”), so be careful with prepositions. Keep it up. You’re improving! See you on Friday! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
1. I think that dividing someone just because they belong to a different group from me is discrimination.
>>I think that excluding someone just because they belong to a different group than me is discrimination.
2. I don’t remember being discriminated against in particular.
>> CORRECT!
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