What is discrimination? Answer in 3 to 5 sentences:

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Discrimination is treating others differently. In our society, we have a plenty of discrimination and it exists over all and everywhere. Racial discrimination, sexual discrimination, age discrimination... Some discriminations are too common and daily, so sometimes they are not regarded as a discrimination. But even though they don\'t seem unreasonable and small, we should try to avoid doing it, because everyone has their own right.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^

Happy Monday :)

Discrimination is treating others differently.

>>> correct

In our society, we have a plenty of discrimination and it exists over all and everywhere.

>>> In our society, we have plenty of discrimination and it exists everywhere.

Racial discrimination, sexual discrimination, age discrimination...

>>> Racial, sexual and age discrimination.

Some discriminations are too common and daily, so sometimes they are not regarded as a discrimination.

>>> Some discriminations are common, so sometimes they are not regarded as discrimination.

But even though they don\'t seem unreasonable and small, we should try to avoid doing it, because everyone has their own right.

>>> correct

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