What is good about cooking?

2018-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I heard that american prefer to eat out instead of eating at home. If we are living alone, eating out is more efficient than eating at home. Because we don't have to buy ingredients for cooking. I have had a lot of experience that has thrown away ingredients that I bought for cooking, because I couldn't use all ingredients within the expire date. In other hands, cooking at home has a lot of advantages, such as making healthy food, saving money and having a time with family. Actually, cooking at home is annoying. Personally, I don't like having a meal at home, if I cooked. But if my wife or mom served it, I would prefer taking my meal at home.

강사 첨삭

You\'re right, Sir [이름]!

That\'s why meal preparation is vital for us to avoid wasting of food. We can reduce the expenditure for food from that strategy, and we can also maximize saving up money. There were some minor flaws that you can definitely look into on your next composition. Hats off to you!

~Teacher Eunice


I heard that american prefer to eat out instead of eating at home. 

>>> I heard that Americans prefer to eat out instead of eating at home. 

If we are living alone, eating out is more efficient than eating at home. 

>>> correct!

Because we don\'t have to buy ingredients for cooking. 

>>> correct!

I have had a lot of experience that has thrown away ingredients that I bought for cooking, because I couldn\'t use all ingredients within the expire date.
>>>
I have had a lot of experiences where I\'ve thrown away ingredients that I bought for cooking, because I couldn\'t use all ingredients within the expire date.  

In other hands, cooking at home has a lot of advantages, such as making healthy food, saving money and having a time with family.
>>>
In other hands, cooking at home has a lot of advantages, such as making healthy food, saving money and having time with family. 

Actually, cooking at home is annoying.

>>> correct!

Personally, I don\'t like having a meal at home, if I cooked.

>>> Personally, I don\'t like having a meal at home if I cooked. 

But if my wife or mom served it, I would prefer taking my meal at home.

>>> correct!


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