What is good about renting something?
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I do not have many experiences to use rental services, but there are advantages.
Frist of all, people borrow paid items which they need temporary. When we travel a place and have to move a lot, a rental car could be the good choice. We can also rent a special costumes for a special day like wedding.
Secondly, there are some gadgets which should be required sophisticated cares. Nowadays many people use a water purifier, but, we should change its filter and clean inside of it, regularly. Therefore, many of them rent it including these treatment. It makes us be more convenient if we pay just a little more.
Finally, renting could be more efficient. On the construction site, people operate various types of heavy equipment that are very expensive. In this case, most companies contract with an equipment company and use it for the exact period when they need this equipment, so they can save the money.
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I do not have many experiences to use rental services, but there are advantages.
>>Correct
Frist of all, people borrow paid items which they need temporary.
Frist of all, people borrow paid items which they need temporary.
>>First of all, people borrow paid items which they need temporarily.
When we travel a place and have to move a lot, a rental car could be the good choice.
>>When we travel to a place and have to move a lot, a rental car could be the good choice.
We can also rent a special costumes for a special day like wedding.
>>We can also rent special costumes for a special day like a wedding.
Secondly, there are some gadgets which should be required sophisticated cares.
Secondly, there are some gadgets which should be required sophisticated cares.
>>Secondly, there are some gadgets which should be required sophisticated care.
Nowadays many people use a water purifier, but, we should change its filter and clean inside of it, regularly.
>>Nowadays, many people use a water purifier, but, we should change its filter and clean inside of it, regularly.
Therefore, many of them rent it including these treatment.
>>Correct
It makes us be more convenient if we pay just a little more.
>>It makes it convenient for us if we pay just a little more.
Finally, renting could be more efficient.
Finally, renting could be more efficient.
>>Correct
On the construction site, people operate various types of heavy equipment that are very expensive.
>>Correct
In this case, most companies contract with an equipment company and use it for the exact period when they need this equipment, so they can save the money.
>>In this case, most companies make a contract with an equipment company and use it for the exact period when they need this equipment, so they can save money.
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