What is good and not good about your job? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is good and not good about your job? Why?
I think my job is good because of high remuneration. However, I think I need to work too much even if I am during my free time. That being said, I\'m satisfied with my job.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I\'m glad that you are still satisfied with your job despite the high demands of it.
Until the next one!
See you next time! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think my job is good because it gives a high pay.
However, I think I need to work too much even if I am during my free time.
>>However, I think I need to work too much even if I am in my free time.
OR>>However, I think I need to work too much even if during my free time.
That being said, I\'m satisfied with my job.
>>CORRECT
OR>>With that being said, I\'m satisfied with my job.
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