What is good behavior? What is bad behavior?

2019-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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I think good behavior is cosidering someone\'s feelings. We always should not hurt someone\'s feelings and hearts. So I think bad behavior is not considering someone\'s feelings. That is so rude. I always try to cosider someone\'s feelings. But It\'s not easy, especially when I fight with my boyfriend. I have to try more to consider someone\'s feelings.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

I think good behavior is cosidering someone\'s feelings.

>>I think good behavior is considering someone\'s feelings. (Spelling - considering)

We always should not hurt someone\'s feelings and hearts.

>>We should not always hurt someone\'s feelings and hearts.

So I think bad behavior is not considering someone\'s feelings. That is so rude.

>>CORRECT

I always try to cosider someone\'s feelings. But It\'s not easy, especially when I fight with my boyfriend.

>>I always try to consider someone\'s feelings. But it\'s not easy, especially when I have a fight with my boyfriend.

I have to try more to consider someone\'s feelings.

>>CORRECT

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