What is great fear to me ??
학생이 쓴 원문
I fear the ghost especailly
Whenever I watch A scared movie, I am not able to sleep well
Because I can`t close my eyes I feel like some kind of ghost with a terrible looking appear above me
I think I'm a little coward When it comes to the ghost, spilit and so one
I would like to say some scary story to you That's I used to say to my students when it rained.
There's a man, very handsome and sucessful in his career Oneday He meet the fortureteller under the bridge, and she said "I can see your future, you have three happiness and one unhappiness in your life"
he just ignored it
after a few years He got married and had very cute two girls
but unluck happened following the happiness.
oneday the cat they are growing died with a terrible sight and He's familly also found in his eyes
he suddenly come up with prophecy and run to the bridge where he meet the foretureteller
and she said " your one unhappiness is your somnambulism "
anyways, Isn't it fun??:)
강사 첨삭
Hey Miss [이름]!
The story you told me is very interesting.
I haven\'t heard this before.
As for me though, I really like watching scary movies and I love hearing scary stories.
I think that if you believe that the ghosts are not real you will stop being scared of them.
Or after watching a scary movie, you would try watching a comedy or some cartoons.
That way, you would forget about the scary movie you watched.
t. Angel
I fear the ghost especailly
>>I fear the ghost most especially.
Whenever I watch A scared movie, I am not able to sleep well
>>Whenever I watch a scary movie, I am not able to sleep well.
Because I can`t close my eyes I feel like some kind of ghost with a terrible looking appear above me
>>Because when I close my eyes, I feel like some kind of ghost that looks really terrible would appear above me.
I think I\'m a little coward When it comes to the ghost, spilit and so one
>>I think I\'m a coward when it comes to ghosts, spirits and so on.
I would like to say some scary story to you That\'s I used to say to my students when it rained.
>>I would like to tell you a scary story that I used to say to my students when it rained.
There\'s a man, very handsome and sucessful in his career Oneday He meet the fortureteller under the bridge, and she said \"I can see your future, you have three happiness and one unhappiness in your life\"
>>It\'s about a very handsome and successful man. One day, he met a fortune teller under the bridge and she said \"I can see your future, you have three happiness and one unhappiness in your life\".
he just ignored it
>>CORRECT! However, the first letter in a sentence should always be capitalized and there should be a period after the sentence.
after a few years He got married and had very cute two girls
>>After a few years, he got married and had two very cute girls.
but unluck happened following the happiness.
>>But something unlucky happened after his happiness.
oneday the cat they are growing died with a terrible sight and He\'s familly also found in his eyes
>>One day their pet cat died and it was a terrible sight. His family also saw it in his eyes.
he suddenly come up with prophecy and run to the bridge where he meet the foretureteller
>>He suddenly remembered the prophecy and ran to the bridge where he met the fortune teller.
and she said \" your one unhappiness is your somnambulism \"
>>And she said \"Your one unhappiness is your somnambulism\".
anyways, Isn\'t it fun??:)
>>CORRECT! However, the first letter in a sentence should always be capitalized.
The story you told me is very interesting.
I haven\'t heard this before.
As for me though, I really like watching scary movies and I love hearing scary stories.
I think that if you believe that the ghosts are not real you will stop being scared of them.
Or after watching a scary movie, you would try watching a comedy or some cartoons.
That way, you would forget about the scary movie you watched.
t. Angel
I fear the ghost especailly
>>I fear the ghost most especially.
Whenever I watch A scared movie, I am not able to sleep well
>>Whenever I watch a scary movie, I am not able to sleep well.
Because I can`t close my eyes I feel like some kind of ghost with a terrible looking appear above me
>>Because when I close my eyes, I feel like some kind of ghost that looks really terrible would appear above me.
I think I\'m a little coward When it comes to the ghost, spilit and so one
>>I think I\'m a coward when it comes to ghosts, spirits and so on.
I would like to say some scary story to you That\'s I used to say to my students when it rained.
>>I would like to tell you a scary story that I used to say to my students when it rained.
There\'s a man, very handsome and sucessful in his career Oneday He meet the fortureteller under the bridge, and she said \"I can see your future, you have three happiness and one unhappiness in your life\"
>>It\'s about a very handsome and successful man. One day, he met a fortune teller under the bridge and she said \"I can see your future, you have three happiness and one unhappiness in your life\".
he just ignored it
>>CORRECT! However, the first letter in a sentence should always be capitalized and there should be a period after the sentence.
after a few years He got married and had very cute two girls
>>After a few years, he got married and had two very cute girls.
but unluck happened following the happiness.
>>But something unlucky happened after his happiness.
oneday the cat they are growing died with a terrible sight and He\'s familly also found in his eyes
>>One day their pet cat died and it was a terrible sight. His family also saw it in his eyes.
he suddenly come up with prophecy and run to the bridge where he meet the foretureteller
>>He suddenly remembered the prophecy and ran to the bridge where he met the fortune teller.
and she said \" your one unhappiness is your somnambulism \"
>>And she said \"Your one unhappiness is your somnambulism\".
anyways, Isn\'t it fun??:)
>>CORRECT! However, the first letter in a sentence should always be capitalized.
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