What is happiness?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It’s magical and marvelous Monday today and let us start this day with a prayer of thanks and grace. Thank you for having the time for your homework. Your hard work and perseverance will pay off because you are interested and eager to be better. Have a nice day ahead. Talk to you later. Ciao!
T. Andi =)
What is happiness?
1.It is control situation my-self.
>> It is to be able to control myself in
situations that are not agreeable to me.
2I.It is not doesn\'t enough..
>> I don’t quite understand what you mean, but I’ll
give my best. Happiness is to be contended with what we have.
3.It is people who receive love .
>> Correct!
4.more achievement at work.
>> More achievement at work gives me
happiness too.
5.go traveling all over the world.
>> To go travelling around the world is also happiness.
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