What is healthy competition?

2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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There are always unhealthy and healthy competition in business and sports, sometimes in any kind of relaitonship. Healthy competition is that both parties can get good benefits or learn good lessons from the competition. To have healthy competition, losers should try to find out good information or truth which will help them to live well in a daily life and compete sucessfully for the next round. We can learn wisdom from our failure or mistake. If we don't lose our hope, encourgement and positive attitude, even losers can't be real ones. If there's some good learning everywhere, it can always be healthy competion.

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To have healthy competition, losers should try to find out good information or truth which will help them to live well in a daily life and compete sucessfully for the next round.
>>>To have a healthy competition, losers should try to find out good information or truth which will help them to live well in their daily lives and compete successfully for the next round.
If there\'s some good learning everywhere, it can always be healthy competion.
>>>If there\'s some good learning everywhere, it can always be a healthy competition.

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