What is holding you back from being the person you want to be?

Superb Tuesday Sir [이름]!

Wow! Your vocabulary skill has been expanding significantly. Thank you for doing your writing task. Please take note of the usage of conjunctions like and, but and so. Yes, you\'re absolutely right! We are facing different endeavors in life and it is up to us on how we act accordingly. Have a great day Sir [이름]. See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Eunice

Indolence is a major thing that block my dream.

>> Indolence is a major thing that blocks my dream. 
If I were diligent, I had a better job and life.

>> Correct! 

If I was not laze at the time I was a studying, I could studied more.

>> If I was not laze at the time I was a student, I could studied more.

I know that I need to be more diligent then I can be closer that I want to be.

>> I know that I need to be more diligent so I can be closer to I want to be.

I should not say that it is because of my family.

>> Correct! 

But it is true that I don\'t have enough time than I was young.

>> It is true that I didn\'t have enough time when I was young.

I need to clean up and arrange my house as soon as I arrive home and have a dinner and play with my children.

>> I need to clean up and arrange things inside my house as soon as I arrived home so I can play and have dinner with my children.
I can have a free time when they fall a sleep.

>> I can have a free time when they fall asleep.
It is almost 10 pm when I check the time.

>> It was almost 10 o\'clock pm when I checked the time.  

This is the best time to watch time.

>> This is the best time to watch movies.

But If I want to be successful, I need to use my time effectively.

>> If I want to be successful, I need to use my time effectively.
 I hope I have a strong will rather than laziness.

>> Correct!