What is importance of English language.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, when we learn English harder, we can pass the entrance exam easily.
Second, it is hard to communicate with foreigners easily.
Third, there are a lot of people using English.
But, English learning is hard.
강사 첨삭
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- T. Rina
1. First, when we learn English harder, we can pass the entrance exam easily.
>> CORRECT!
2. Second, it is hard to communicate with foreigners easily.
>> CORRECT!
3. Third, there are a lot of people using English.
>> CORRECT!
4. But, English learning is hard.
>> CORRECT!
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