What is important thing
학생이 쓴 원문
My important thing for now is my familiy and my future.
Because It is my belief for my life.
I wish I become a cool person when I and other people judge me.
For my hope, I should believe me at first and there should be at least one person who believes in it.
So, I think me and my family are my important things for keeping my [이름]d.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jady!
Let\'s learn new vocabulary words.
There are so many expressions that would match your thoughts perfectly.
We can practice using them.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My important thing for now is my familiy and my future.
>> The important things for me now are my family and my future.
Because It is my belief for my life.
Because It is my belief for my life.
>> It\'s my belief in life.
I wish I become a cool person when I and other people judge me.
I wish I become a cool person when I and other people judge me.
>> I wish I could become a cool person when other people see me or when I look at myself.
For my hope, I should believe me at first and there should be at least one person who believes in it.
For my hope, I should believe me at first and there should be at least one person who believes in it.
>> For my hope, I should believe in myself first, and there should be at least one person who believes in it.
So, I think me and my family are my important things for keeping my [이름]d.
So, I think me and my family are my important things for keeping my [이름]d.
>> So, I think my family and I are the important things in my [이름]d.
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