what is love?
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강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for your composition today! Wow! This is such a profound definition of love! Thanks for sharing. Enjoy the weekend!
T. JanE ^^
The word of \'LOVE\' is abstractive mean and act.
>> The word \'love\' is abstract in meaning.
Thus objects of love are variety and plenty from nature to people.
>> Correct
I think love is a thinking and attention about opponent\' situation and mind of caring.
>> I think love is thinking and paying attention to other people\'s mind.
So we have to care weak and poor animal, people and others.
>> SO we have to care for the weak, poor animals, people, and others.
And nature give us life that are birth, food , fresh air etc. love is that we reserve nature for itself.
>> Nature gives us life, food, fresh air, etc. Love is preserving nature for itself.
and we think first ohers.
>> We think about others first.
It is \'LOVE\'
>> Correct
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