what is love?

2017-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

The word of 'LOVE' is abstractive mean and act. Thus objects of love are variety and plenty from nature to people. I think love is a thinking and attention about opponent' situation and mind of caring. So we have to care weak and poor animal, people and others. And nature give us life that are birth, food , fresh air etc. love is that we reserve nature for itself. and we think first ohers. It is 'LOVE'

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for your composition today! Wow! This is such a profound definition of love! Thanks for sharing. Enjoy the weekend!

T. JanE ^^

The word of \'LOVE\' is abstractive mean and act.

>> The word \'love\' is abstract in meaning. 

Thus objects of love are variety and plenty from nature to people.

>> Correct

I think love is a thinking and attention about opponent\' situation and mind of caring.

>> I think love is thinking and paying attention to other people\'s mind.

So we have to care weak and poor animal, people and others.

>> SO we have to care for the weak, poor animals, people, and others. 

And nature give us life that are birth, food , fresh air etc. love is that we reserve nature for itself.

>> Nature gives us life, food, fresh air, etc. Love is preserving nature for itself. 

and we think first ohers.

>> We think about others first.

It is \'LOVE\'

>> Correct

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