What is love? How do you express your love?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this.
I see your point. ^^
Being appreciative is actually one of the best ways on how we can show our love for someone.
That\'s why I do my best to show my appreciation to all the important people in my life.
Life is short, and I don\'t want my parents to leave this earth feeling like I loved them less than they deserve. ^^
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As someone told me one day “You don’t thank(appreciate) me.”, so I got much embarrassed.
>> One day, someone told me, \"You don\'t thank/ appreciate me.\", and I felt so embarrassed.
Until the very moment, I had thought that I delivered and expressed my appreciations to him as enough and frequently as he recognized that I did.
>> Until that very moment, I thought I delivered and expressed my appreciation to him as enough, and as frequently as he could have recognized that I did.
If we failed to express love as enough and clearly as the other side feel it, that’s not a love.
>> I think, if we fail to express love as enough and as clearly towards the other person, it is not love.
In order to express my love, I’m trying to buy dinner, flowers, birthday presents and to say ‘thanks’, ‘I love you’.
>> At present, in order to express my love, I try to buy dinner, flowers, birthday presents and give words of appreciation like: \"thanks\" and \"I love you.\"
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