What is mannerism? Do you have mannerisms that you wanted to get rid of?
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I think about a mannerism that It\'s an attitude. Because I think that a mannerism starts with attitude. and, I want to get rid of being afraid of strangers. :)
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I think about a mannerism that It\'s an attitude.
>>> I think mannerism is an attitude.
>>> When I think about mannerisms I can link that to attitude.
Because I think that a mannerism starts with attitude.
>>> Because I think that mannerism starts with an attitude.
and, I want to get rid of being afraid of strangers. :)
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I hope to get rid the feeling of being afraid of strangers.
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