What is more important, beauty or personality ?
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Theorically the personality is more important than beauty,
>>> Theoretically, personality is ore important than beauty.
However we count for the beauty more than a personality when we juge someone at the first meeting.
>>> However, we focus more on beauty than personality of a person when we meet them for the first time.
Because the beauty is transitory standard when we meet someone else.
>>> Because beauty is a transitory standard when we meet someone.
It can give a good impression but if you don\'t have a decent personality, you can\'t keep the relationship for long terme.
>>> It can give you a good impression but if you don\'t have a decent personality, you can\'t keep a relationship for a long time.
_T MICHELLE_
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