What is more important to care for mental or physical health?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that physical health leads to a healthy mental Because being healthy gives me confidence.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I think that physical health leads to a healthy mental Because being healthy gives me confidence.
>> I think that physical health leads to a healthy mind because being healthy gives me confidence.
OR >> I believe that good physical health contributes to mental well-being, as staying healthy boosts my confidence.
>> I think that physical health leads to a healthy mind because being healthy gives me confidence.
OR >> I believe that good physical health contributes to mental well-being, as staying healthy boosts my confidence.
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