What is more important to care for mental or physical health?
학생이 쓴 원문
Both are important.
However, if I should decide order, I would choose physical health care.
When the physical health are weak, it is easy to collapse the mental health.
So I thought physical care is priority
강사 첨삭
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Both are important.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Both hold great value.
However, if I should decide order, I would choose physical health care.
>> However, if I had to prioritize, I would choose physical health care.
When the physical health are weak, it is easy to collapse the mental health.
>> When physical health is weak, it is easy for mental health to collapse.
So I thought physical care is priority
>> So, I believe physical care should come first.
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