What is more important to take care of: mental health or physical health?

2020-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I think physical health is more important to take care of. I think I have good physical health first to take care of my mental health. It is because I think I can afford to take care of other things if I don\'t get sick physically.

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Hello [이름]! ^^

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Have a wonderful night. :)

~ T. Tricia

I think physical health is more important to take care of.
>> CORRECT!

I think I have good physical health first to take care of my mental health.
>> I think I have to have good physical health first to take care of my mental health.

It is because I think I can afford to take care of other things if I don\'t get sick physically.
>> It is because I think I can\'t afford to take care of other things if I don\'t get sick physically.

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