What is more important to take care of : mental health or physical health?
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Both physical and mental health are equally important to me. When the mind collapses, the body weakens, and vice versa. In the Greek old saying, \"A sound mind in a sound body\"
However, if I have to choose one, I think I should pay more attention to my physical health in my age when I have to be careful about adult diseases to have my healthy life in the second half of my life.
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Hi, Steve! Thank you for doing your homework. Your
sentences and spelling are both commendable. Keep it up!
- Debbie
>> This is a good sentence.
However, if I have to choose one, I think I should pay more attention to my physical health in my age when I have to be careful about adult diseases to have my healthy life in the second half of my life.
When the mind collapses, the body weakens, and vice versa.
>> When the mind collapses, the body weakens, and vice versa.
In the Greek old saying, \"A sound mind in a sound body\"
In the Greek old saying, \"A sound mind in a sound body\"
>> In Greece, they have a saying: A sound mind in a sound body.
However, if I have to choose one, I think I should pay more attention to my physical health in my age when I have to be careful about adult diseases to have my healthy life in the second half of my life.
>> However, if I have to choose one, I think I should pay more attention to my physical health. At my age, I have to be careful about adult diseases to have a healthy life in the second half of my life.
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