What is more important to take care of: mental health or physical health?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think mental health is more important. Because you can live a desirable life by eating well and exercising when you have a good mind. And if your mental health is bad, you can commit suicide.
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I think mental health is more important.
>>> CORRECT!
Because you can live a desirable life by eating well and exercising when you have a good mind.
>>> CORRECT!
And if your mental health is bad, you can commit suicide.
>>> CORRECT!
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