What is more important to take care of: mental health or physical health?
학생이 쓴 원문
Health problems are very important for us to live.
Mental health and physical health are always in need of care, but we forget.
There are three conditions to protect health.
It is exercise, good food and a good environment.
As the saying goes, keep your health healthy. It is said.
First, exercise steadily to maintain physical balance
Second, it absorbs nutrients with various foods
Third, it is important to live in a good air environment.
If you meet the above three requirements, you can live healthy.
강사 첨삭
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>>CORRECT!
Mental health and physical health are always in need of care, but we forget.
Mental health and physical health are always in need of care, but we forget.
>>Mental health and physical health always need our attention, but we forget about them.
There are three conditions to protect health.
There are three conditions to protect health.
>>CORRECT!
It is exercise, good food and a good environment.
It is exercise, good food and a good environment.
>>These are exercise, good food and good environment.
As the saying goes, keep your health healthy. It is said.
As the saying goes, keep your health healthy. It is said.
>>CORRECT!
First, exercise steadily to maintain physical balance.
First, exercise steadily to maintain physical balance.
>>CORRECT!
Second, it absorbs nutrients with various foods.
Second, it absorbs nutrients with various foods.
>>Second, absorb nutrients from various food groups.
Third, it is important to live in a good air environment.
>>Third, it is important to live in an environment with clean air.
If you meet the above three requirements, you can live healthy.
If you meet the above three requirements, you can live healthy.
>>If you meet the above three requirements, you can live healthy.
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