What is more important to you? Social issues or environmental problems?
학생이 쓴 원문
Social issues are more important to me. In case of environmental problems environment doesn\'t affect to me directly. And for having problems about environment directly we have to wait very long time maybe until next generation. I mean environmental problems move very slowly. But in case of social issues they can influence to our life. Because of social issues our job can be changed. So I usually move rapidly to know social issues.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna! Your opinion makes a lot of sense. It is very true that we react to what affect us directly. I wonder what could possibly in the future. Thank you for sharing your thoughts today. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
In case of environmental problems environment doesn\'t affect to me directly.
>>In case of environmental problems, it doesn\'t affect me directly.
And for having problems about environment directly we have to wait very long time maybe until next generation.
>>And, environmental problems are not directly felt because it will take until next generation to have an effect.
I mean environmental problems move very slowly.
>>I mean that environmental problems happen gradually.
But in case of social issues they can influence to our life.
>>But in case of social issues, they can directly influence our lives.
Because of social issues our job can be changed. So I usually move rapidly to know social issues.
>>Because of social issues our jobs can be changed. So, I usually proactively know about social issues.
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