What is more important when it comes to clothing, comfort or style?
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Both are important, but if I have to choose one, I will choose the comfort. Confience is the biggest thing that wearig good cloths gives me. Because I care how others look at me a little too much. Comfort cloths can relax me and help focusing on other things but it doesn\'t give me confidence. Stylish cloths is in the opposite side but I matter being confidence so I choose style.
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Both are important, but if I have to choose one, I will choose the comfort.
>> Correct!
OR: Both are important, but if I had to choose between the two, I would choose comfort.
Confience is the biggest thing that wearig good cloths gives me.
>> Correct!
OR: The most important benefit of wearing nice clothes is that it gives me confidence.
Because I care how others look at me a little too much.
>> Correct!
OR: Because I am a little overly concerned with how others perceive me.
Comfort cloths can relax me and help focusing on other things but it doesn\'t give me confidence.
>> Correct!
OR: Comfort clothes can help me relax and concentrate on other things, but they don\'t boost my confidence.
Stylish cloths is in the opposite side but I matter being confidence so I choose style.
OR: Stylish clothes are on the other side, but I care about confidence, so I choose style.
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