what is most challenging part of traveling?

2023-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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The most challenging part of traveling of foreign countries is a means of transportation. I need to get an information about it as can as possible before go to other countries. If I need a car in some cities or countries, I should know how to rent a car or I should book a car before go there. If I need to take a bus or subway, I need a map or a time schedule of that vehicle. These are my most challenging part of traveling.

강사 첨삭

That is a good way to have a smoother travel experience in a country, Elena. Thank you for sharing this tip. -Faith-
The most challenging part of traveling of foreign countries is a means of transportation. 
>> The most challenging part of traveling to foreign countries is the mean of transportation. 
I need to get an information about it as can as possible before go to other countries. 
>> I need to get information about it as soon as possible before going. 
If I need a car in some cities or countries, I should know how to rent a car or I should book a car before go there. 
>> If I need a car in some cities or countries, I should know how to rent a car or I should book a car before going there. 
If I need to take a bus or subway, I need a map or a time schedule of that vehicle. 
>> CORRECT
OR Whichever mode of transportation I take, I need a map or their timetable.
These are my most challenging part of traveling.
>> These are my most challenging parts of traveling.

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