What is my biggest complaints about my friends.

2023-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I didn\'t think about complaints about my friends. However, I have one complaint about her. When my friend angry by herself, she didn\'t say anything. I can\'t understand why she did that. She just angry by herself. However, we are best friend. There are many weaknesses, but there are good things, too. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
You are just getting better every day.
This is a good start for the week.
I hope we will have a productive week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I didn\'t think about complaints about my friends.
>> I can\'t think of complaints I have about my friends. 
However, I have one complaint about her.
>> However, I have a complaint about one of my friends.
When my friend angry by herself, she didn\'t say anything.
>> When my friend is angry about something, she usually doesn\'t say anything. 
I can\'t understand why she did that.
>> I can\'t understand why she does that.
She just angry by herself.
>> She is just angry by herself.
However, we are best friend.
>> However, we are best friends.
There are many weaknesses, but there are good things, too.
>> Correct

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