What is my favorite season
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite season is winter.
That is because we can snowball fight
My second reason is the winter is cold and I like cold
My third reason is I can rolling the snow. So, I can make snowman
Finally, I like the slipy floor and the snow is very slipy
강사 첨삭
My favorite season is winter.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because we can snowball fight
My second reason is the winter is cold and I like cold
My third reason is I can rolling the snow. So, I can make snowman
Finally, I like the slipy floor and the snow is very slipy
That is because we can snowball fight
>> That is because we can play snowball fight.
My second reason is the winter is cold and I like cold
>> The second reason I like it is because it\'s cold in winter, and I like cold.
My third reason is I can rolling the snow. So, I can make snowman
>> The third reason is I can roll on the snow and make a snowman.
Finally, I like the slipy floor and the snow is very slipy
>> Finally, I like slippery floors, and snow is very slippery.
Hi, [이름]! Please be careful when you walk on slippery floors and ground. Alright?
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