What is my favorite thing to do on social media
학생이 쓴 원문
I do many things do on social media.
Like watching Youtube videos or see other people\'s posters.
But my favorite thing is talking with my friends on the social media.
It\'s because I love to talking with someone.
When I talking with my friends, I feel the time flies.
Therefore, I love talking with my friends on the social media.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today.
You have tried your best to express your thoughts in the sentences.
I hope you will continue putting in the effort in your classes.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I do many things do on social media.
>> I do many things on social media.
Like watching Youtube videos or see other people\'s posters.
Like watching Youtube videos or see other people\'s posters.
>> I like watching YouTube videos or looking at other people\'s posters.
But my favorite thing is talking with my friends on the social media.
But my favorite thing is talking with my friends on the social media.
>> However, my favorite thing is talking with my friends on social media.
It\'s because I love to talking with someone.
It\'s because I love to talking with someone.
>> It\'s because I love talking with someone.
When I talking with my friends, I feel the time flies.
When I talking with my friends, I feel the time flies.
>> When I talk with my friends, I feel like the time flies.
Therefore, I love talking with my friends on the social media.
Therefore, I love talking with my friends on the social media.
>> Therefore, I love talking with my friends on social media.
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