What is my hometown known for?
학생이 쓴 원문
My hometown is Pyeongtaek and that name means even and rich ground.
Even and rich ground is a good environment to farm so there are some popular produces in my hometown like rice and pear.
These days we have started to grow blueberries and aronia.
Also, There are some U.S army bases in Pyeongtaek so many foreigners live in my hometown.
You can have fun with searching and visiting many native style restaurants.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. I appreciate you doing your homework. I always look forward to it. I would love to know more about your hometown though so I hope we could have the chance to talk about it in one of our classes. Another job well done. Keep it up! ~ teacher Jane ^_^
My hometown is Pyeongtaek and that name means even and rich ground.
>>> CORRECT =)
Even and rich ground is a good environment to farm so there are some popular produces in my hometown like rice and pear.
>>> Even and rich ground is a good environment for farming so there are some popular produce in my hometown like rice and pear.
These days we have started to grow blueberries and aronia.
>>> CORRECT =)
Also, There are some U.S army bases in Pyeongtaek so many foreigners live in my hometown.
>>> Also, there is a U.S. military base in Pyeongtaek so many foreigners live in my hometown.
You can have fun with searching and visiting many native style restaurants.
>>> You can have fun while searching and visiting many native style restaurants.
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