what is necessary for sucsess.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't think that high school diploma or college degree isn't necessry for sucsess.
But it was advantaged for achivement in Korean culture.
So people should know something to want before who decide their diploma or degree.
One way is general rule, the other is individual thing.
Evetually, people should make one's own decision.
Trully, it is knowing oneselves necessary for sucess.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for your time and effort.
Have time to check my corrections for you^^
See you in class^^
TEACHER ROSE
I don\'t think that high school diploma or college degree isn\'t necessry for sucsess.
>>CorrectBut it was advantaged for achivement in Korean culture.
>>But it is an advantage in Korean culture.So people should know something to want before who decide their diploma or degree.
>>So people should think very well on what course to enroll.One way is general rule, the other is individual thing.
>> The other one is a general rule and the other is an individual rule.Evetually, people should make one\'s own decision.>>Eventually, people should make their own decision.
Trully, it is knowing oneselves necessary for sucess. >> Truly, knowing yourself is necessary for success.
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