What is on your bucket list?
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First one - watching all of Marvel movie series.
- If I want to do this thing, I have to be grown up.
Second one - traveling to Europe ( France, Germany, and Austria. ).
- I want to go to Paris ( France ), Berlin ( Germany ), and Vienna ( Austria ).
Third one - I want to be rapper in the future.
- If I want to do this thing, I have to practice very hard.
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Hi [이름]! We all have a bucket list wherein we want to achieve everything in it. It gives us something to look forward to in the future. Yours is actually quite interesting You can achieve all these things. Just put some dedication into it.
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First one - watching all of Marvel movie series.
- If I want to do this thing, I have to be grown up.
Second one - traveling to Europe ( France, Germany, and Austria. ).
- I want to go to Paris ( France ), Berlin ( Germany ), and Vienna ( Austria ).
Third one - I want to be rapper in the future.
- If I want to do this thing, I have to practice very hard.
>> First one is that I want to watch all the Marvel series.
- If I want to do this thing, I have to be grown up.
>> I have to be a grown up first to do this.
Second one - traveling to Europe ( France, Germany, and Austria. ).
>> Second one is that I want to visit European countries like France, Germany and Austria.
- I want to go to Paris ( France ), Berlin ( Germany ), and Vienna ( Austria ).
>> To be specific, I want to visit Paris, Berlin and Vienna.
Third one - I want to be rapper in the future.
>> The last one is that I want to be a rapper in the future.
- If I want to do this thing, I have to practice very hard.
>> If I want to achieve this, I have to practice very hard.
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