What is on your bucket list?
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I want to try the extreme sports on my bucket list. One of them that I really try to is a skydiving. It\'s not common experience. Also that would be worth in my life because if I can do it, it seems like overcoming fear. So I can do it whatever I will do after that.
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I want to try the extreme sports on my bucket list.
>> One of my bucket list is to try an extreme sports.
One of them that I really try to is a skydiving.
>> I really want to try skydiving.
It\'s not common experience. Also that would be worth in my life because if I can do it, it seems like overcoming fear.
>> Skydiving is a one of a kind experience and it\'s really worth the try because it is one way of overcoming my fear.
So I can do it whatever I will do after that.
>> So, I am really willing to try Skydiving.
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