What is one food you can\'t live without?
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I can\'t live without a rice. It\'s a main food in South Korea. I can make fried rice, I can mix it with eggs, and there are many things I can do, it has eaten in South Korea for a long time.
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I can\'t live without a rice.
>> I can\'t live without rice.
It\'s a main food in South Korea.
>> It\'s the main food in South Korea.
I can make fried rice, I can mix it with eggs, and there are many things I can do, it has eaten in South Korea for a long time.
>> I can make fried rice and I can mix it with eggs. There are many things I can do. Koreans has been eating it for a long time.
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