What is one food you can\'t live without?
학생이 쓴 원문
What is one food you can\'t live without?
It is kimchi.
I have been eating it since I was a kid. I can’t live without it.
This is not only me but also all Koreans. This is [Name] soul food.
We can make a lot of food with this.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I agree. This is a staple food there in your country. Everyone loves it.
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I have been eating it since I was a kid.
This is not only me but also all Koreans.
We can make a lot of food with this.
It is kimchi.
>> CORRECT
I have been eating it since I was a kid.
>> CORRECT
I can’t live without it.
>> CORRECT
This is not only me but also all Koreans.
>> This is not only for me but to all Koreans as well.
This is [Name] soul food.
>> This is [Name] Korea\'s soul food.
We can make a lot of food with this.
>> CORRECT
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