What is one goal you want to achieve within the next five years?

2025-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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What is one goal you want to achieve within the next five years? The first goal of my life is IPO of my company within the next 3 years. And i hope my eldest daughter goes to a good university.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jack,

I’m really happy to see you again!

Thank you for sharing your goals, they’re very clear, strong, and meaningful.

Your first goal, taking your company to an IPO within the next three years, is amazing. That takes a lot of hard work, leadership, and vision. I can see how focused and determined you are.

And your second goal, hoping your eldest daughter enters a good university, shows how much you care about your family. It’s a beautiful wish, and it reflects what kind of father you are: responsible, supportive, and full of love.

Your goals are big, but very possible. I believe you can achieve both with your effort and mindset. Keep going, Jack!

~Teacher Cathy

 

The first goal of my life is IPO of my company within the next 3 years.

>>My first goal in life is to take my company public within the next three years.

And I hope my eldest daughter goes to a good university.

>>CORRECT

OR>>And I hope my eldest daughter gets into a good university.

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